Archive for September 6th, 2011

Commenters, Unite! Tell Me How Good I Am (So I Can Quit) (SIC)

[A note to kind, gentle, and loving people: Please avoid this post if my trashy experimentalism is at all offensive. Otherwise read aloud and then read aloud from bottom line back to the top. Okay, back to the insanity…]

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Folding the Laundry

Folding the laundry,
I’m an ant under the concrete not so old,
an overwhelming pad, and I am tiny.

Moving through oceans of dirt,
finding the solidified gray
less tainted than my shirts,

I want to chuck my socks
beyond desolation’s border,
but my robotic kinetics continue
as the carpet is entombed
by piles of chaos.

The other ants left long ago,
leaving behind a stadium,
a tribute to a gaudy culture.

I merely pray, longing for light,
waiting for Mozart to penetrate
my conglomerated malaise of
cements, stones, desolation and fears.

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