Grabbing All the Bad for Himself 100

Jerry is leaving, peaceful. Good day, productive, boss thought he was leaving too early but today is shrink day. Jerry likes leaving 45 minutes for that drive but he left 40 today. Tool Band. Air conditioner is too damned not cold. Music too loud. Good. Made a bunch of greens. This red and he brings out his latest poetry book. Inspired, breathing slowly, happy. No rush hour madness today. Breathing deeply, big happy chemicals from book. Jerry is a dry sponge and each vicious driver is filling him up, wet with evil meanness. Jerry will be bad-ass, protect his space.

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  1. #1 by Indigo Spider on June 10, 2011 - 11:24 am

    Love the line “each vicious driver is filling him up, wet with evil meanness.” Wonderful.

    • #2 by Carl on June 10, 2011 - 11:09 pm

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

  2. #3 by Kay Camden on June 13, 2011 - 12:19 pm

    If there’s no rush hour madness, why are the drivers vicious?

    • #4 by Carl on June 13, 2011 - 4:41 pm

      He worked to set himself up to not be bothered by the madness but it got him badly anyway.

      • #5 by Kay Camden on June 13, 2011 - 9:54 pm

        OOOhhh. I’m glad I asked. 🙂

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