She brought summer into the building,
and I stuttered and stalled and stopped,
and I felt full of grace,
and the ceiling lifted a bit,
and the lights brightened,
and the air did what you think not,
it cooled like a spring breeze.
For a moment, life was in the air.
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#1 by screen_scribbla on May 11, 2011 - 8:52 am
A familiar feeling expressed better than I would have done. I think this is fantastic.
#2 by Carl on May 11, 2011 - 11:18 pm
Thank you for your very kind comment. You are generous with your praise, and I appreciate it!
#3 by Kay Camden on May 11, 2011 - 9:32 am
Oh I love this one! Are you a romantic? 😉
#4 by Carl on May 11, 2011 - 11:19 pm
Thank you for your comment.
I think this spirit comes out once or twice a year, and this is the second time this year…
#5 by pattisj on May 12, 2011 - 12:20 am
That’s lovely!
#6 by Carl on May 12, 2011 - 7:02 am
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.