Trees on Heart

Saint in heart
reading solemn text.
He tells me
what to do.
But these brown trees keep growing
from my depressed skull.

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  1. #1 by Val Erde on April 20, 2011 - 8:55 am

    I know the feeling.

    • #2 by Carl on April 20, 2011 - 9:50 pm

      Thank you for your comment.

  2. #3 by Marian on April 20, 2011 - 5:42 pm

    rockin the shardoma!

  3. #4 by Marian on April 20, 2011 - 5:42 pm

    or shadorma. i love the form and never get the name right.

    • #5 by Carl on April 20, 2011 - 9:57 pm

      Thank you for your comment. I think your second version is right, but I get confused on it too. The other one that bothers me is why do they add an A to Tank?

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