Nature Groans

Warm fuels green fusion
specks, contrails, windows, insects.
Swim in joy, dig deep.
Blades bend, arc in smooth caress.
Soon we will dance with bunnies.


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  1. #1 by Evelyn on April 6, 2011 - 10:34 am

    yes please!
    bunnies are excellent dance partners…
    love this.
    you are really good with the tanka…mastering yet another thing.
    nerd. 🙂
    perfect title…love the first line.

    • #2 by Carl on April 6, 2011 - 9:29 pm

      Thank you for your kind comment!

  2. #3 by screen_scribbla on April 7, 2011 - 3:44 pm

    Like Evelyn said.
    “Warm fuels green fusion” is one of those lines I wish I’d written. Masterful.

    • #4 by Carl on April 7, 2011 - 10:06 pm

      Those are very kind words. I appreciate it.

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