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Hall Monitor in Sunshine

Staring without tears,
intent, sinking under love.
Sunshine blinks mercy.
Your walk round, impeccable,
immeasurable sweetness.

 

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This entry was posted on March 30, 2011, 5:15 am and is filed under Poems. You can follow any responses to this entry through RSS 2.0. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

  1. #1 by Evelyn on March 30, 2011 - 7:25 am

    Wow. This is so sweet, romantic, loving.
    Tanka suits you.

    Reply

    • #2 by Carl on March 31, 2011 - 12:11 am

      Thank you. Form controls my blabber.

      Reply

  2. #3 by carldagostino on March 30, 2011 - 8:49 pm

    “sunshine blinks mercy” I love creative metaphors with imagery

    Reply

    • #4 by Carl on March 31, 2011 - 12:11 am

      Thank you for your comment.

      Reply

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