Frost For God Rock

is my word, half empty life.
His word, polish, scorns me.
No matter, my god rock’s free
in pocket, providing safety.


A little tribute for Eric who is a master of forms

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  1. #1 by Evelyn on February 26, 2011 - 10:59 pm

    “His word, polish, scorns me.”
    Great line…

    • #2 by Carl on February 27, 2011 - 12:10 pm

      I’m giving up rhyming for now.

  2. #3 by Eric on February 27, 2011 - 9:37 am

    God Rock? Is that Christian music? (LOL!)

    Cool Frost, Carl! (No pun intended) 🙂

    • #4 by Carl on February 27, 2011 - 12:07 pm

      It’s cool rock and God Frost, Eric! Thanks for laying down the challenge.

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