Push Me

Orange bulbs,
dancing hair,
flagrant violations loom.
Scrub front.
Zone straight.
Hover blue in sweet peace.

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  1. #1 by Tharlam Gyatso on February 18, 2011 - 2:21 am

    Quite frankly, beautiful.

    I could read it over and over…

    • #2 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 7:24 am

      Thank you so much for your comment! That means the world to me.

  2. #3 by kolembo on February 18, 2011 - 4:39 am

    I did! Yes, haunting for me…the first three lines (excellent by the way) seem exactely mirrored by the last three. I have the image of a raging goddess, (kali or medussa) face to face with an Ice deity, a thin slice of water, steam on one side, ice on the other between them. Yes. Very visual.

    • #4 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 7:26 am

      Oh, I love your picture. I wish I could paint that! Thank you, K!

  3. #5 by undeniablymaybe on February 18, 2011 - 7:46 am

    Simple, visual. Love it.

    • #6 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 9:25 pm

      Thank you. I appreciate your comment.

  4. #7 by Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved on February 18, 2011 - 9:12 am

    Kali Ma? Very fine.

    • #8 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 9:37 pm

      Thank you, Jamie! All of you are painting a much more exciting picture than what was seen. I love that.

  5. #9 by liv2write2day on February 18, 2011 - 12:40 pm

    Not sure why, but I visualize crocuses!? Loved it, even if I’m way off base.

    • #10 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 9:39 pm

      I don’t think you can be off base on this one. I love hearing what you see. It is exciting for me. Thanks for commenting.

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