flagrant violations loom.
Hover blue in sweet peace.
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#1 by Tharlam Gyatso on February 18, 2011 - 2:21 am
Quite frankly, beautiful.
I could read it over and over…
#2 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 7:24 am
Thank you so much for your comment! That means the world to me.
#3 by kolembo on February 18, 2011 - 4:39 am
I did! Yes, haunting for me…the first three lines (excellent by the way) seem exactely mirrored by the last three. I have the image of a raging goddess, (kali or medussa) face to face with an Ice deity, a thin slice of water, steam on one side, ice on the other between them. Yes. Very visual.
#4 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 7:26 am
Oh, I love your picture. I wish I could paint that! Thank you, K!
#5 by undeniablymaybe on February 18, 2011 - 7:46 am
Simple, visual. Love it.
#6 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 9:25 pm
Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
#7 by Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved on February 18, 2011 - 9:12 am
Kali Ma? Very fine.
#8 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 9:37 pm
Thank you, Jamie! All of you are painting a much more exciting picture than what was seen. I love that.
#9 by liv2write2day on February 18, 2011 - 12:40 pm
Not sure why, but I visualize crocuses!? Loved it, even if I’m way off base.
#10 by Carl on February 18, 2011 - 9:39 pm
I don’t think you can be off base on this one. I love hearing what you see. It is exciting for me. Thanks for commenting.
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