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Clear Stupid

Clear stupid.
Stick me dead.
You, unconscious,
stick me dead.
You say whoops.

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This entry was posted on February 15, 2011, 10:02 pm and is filed under Poems. You can follow any responses to this entry through RSS 2.0. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

  1. #1 by Eric on February 16, 2011 - 9:41 am

    I like the stiff, halting delivery here, Carl.

    But it reminds me a litle of:

    “Me Tarzan, you Jane. Me write poem.”
    – or –
    “Yes, Kimosabi. Tonto write big poem”

    Reply

    • #2 by Carl on February 16, 2011 - 11:55 pm

      Eric,
      You nailed it. You know what I was after, but the “me write poem” deal is exactly right. It’s one of those things where you say, “I know something is wrong here…”

      Oh well, it was a fun little ditty…

      Thanks for commenting!

      Reply

  2. #3 by Evelyn on February 16, 2011 - 9:10 pm

    this is really kick ass.
    no doubt.

    Reply

    • #4 by Carl on February 16, 2011 - 11:56 pm

      I am lucky that your tastes are rather eclectic or something.

      Thank you for your kindness!

      Reply

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