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Slash Me Bad

One comment,
content or tone or both,
slams me so vehemently.

I am at fault.

I drop the trail of my heart all day.

No one cares to repair me.

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  1. #1 by y on February 9, 2011 - 10:07 pm

    oh, i love the line, “I drop the trail of my heart all day.” how lovely!

    • #2 by Carl on February 9, 2011 - 10:32 pm

      Thank you so much! Thank you for commenting.

  2. #3 by y on February 9, 2011 - 10:51 pm

    by nightfall, the
    trail of my
    heart is moon-
    glazed and leads
    nowhere – follow
    at your discretion,
    it has been known
    to build cadences
    and impromptus,
    verdant ledges
    over shimmering
    cities,
    out of the
    softest footsteps
    .
    20110209:2349
    y

    • #4 by Carl on February 9, 2011 - 11:05 pm

      That is truly amazing! I love your work!

      • #5 by y on February 9, 2011 - 11:07 pm

        you are too generous – thank YOU for the inspiration! (smile)

  3. #6 by Marian on February 10, 2011 - 8:49 am

    whoa, your poem and this lovely exchange here have stopped me in my tracks.

    • #7 by Carl on February 10, 2011 - 8:06 pm

      Those are important words from you, Marian. Thank you for your kindness!

  4. #8 by Evelyn on February 10, 2011 - 7:38 pm

    I care.

    • #9 by Carl on February 10, 2011 - 9:16 pm

      You’re amazing. Your kindness is repairing too!

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