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Faith Might Come Back

 

Bat-shit-crazy sober.
All but I restored.
Pray harder.
Find the right god.
Someone prays for me.
Wait for god.
Is god inside?
How long shall I wait?

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  1. #1 by Evelyn on January 29, 2011 - 3:48 pm

    “Bat-shit-crazy sober.
    All but I restored.”
    wonderful lines.
    wow.

    • #2 by Carl on January 29, 2011 - 10:28 pm

      Thank you, my friend!

  2. #3 by Margaret on January 29, 2011 - 9:45 pm

    That is wonderful. Conveys the pressure from outside to do it do it do it do it, as though we’re not trying.

    • #4 by Carl on January 29, 2011 - 10:35 pm

      Margaret, thank you! You get it!

  3. #5 by undeniablymaybe on January 29, 2011 - 11:32 pm

    Everyone’s seeking something…

    • #6 by Carl on January 30, 2011 - 6:59 am

      Yes, which often is nothing, or nothing different. Thank you for your comment.

  4. #7 by Raven on January 31, 2011 - 9:44 am

    Sometimes I wonder if that line if thought is little more than a distraction from real life (whatever that may be). But you put the confusion, the wondering, and even the fraction of hope, I feel when I start looking…well done.

    • #8 by Carl on January 31, 2011 - 8:42 pm

      Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it!

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