Looking for Her Forever

Oh, thin, luscious black on massive white!
Oh, the cascading, golden brown, smooth candy!
Shape of a sweet berry swiftly arises within the offering.
Her hand is delicate and alluring and beckoning.
Gives me a hurricane of joy.
Warmth moves hot over ice.
Cannot watch my step; I stop.
Eyes sparkle from miles away.
The glass cannot stop her heat.
Great care is in charge of the massive ship.
She is as compassionate as any child of god.
Red lights reveal the end of my illusory love.
Delicate movement with giant metals.
I’m looking for her all day.
I want to think she wants me.
I will look for her tomorrow.


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  1. #1 by Evelyn on January 22, 2011 - 11:31 am

    This is very impressive.
    “The glass cannot stop her heat.”
    man, thats a perfect line.

    “She is as compassionate as any child of god.”

    “Delicate movement with giant metals.”
    delicious bite!

    • #2 by Carl on January 22, 2011 - 11:02 pm

      Thank you for your comment, Evelyn. It helps a ton.

  2. #3 by Scent of my heart on January 22, 2011 - 8:04 pm

    I have to agree with Evelyn here, masterful writing and so heartfelt! Thanks for sharing!

    • #4 by Carl on January 22, 2011 - 11:02 pm

      Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.

  3. #5 by Scent of my heart on January 22, 2011 - 8:04 pm

    Greetings! How is your weekend?

    I am Blaga from Jingle Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

    You are invited to join us this Sunday for our Monday Poetry Potluck Week 19, we are open 8pm, American Central, will remain open for 72 hours, yet, you get better traffic when you link in early.

    if you fall short writing a theme related piece, feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems…Best Regards.

    You have a lovely blog, your poetry radiate and it is our greatest pleasure to have you being part of our growing community. Hope to see you in..sign in to follow our blog if you can!

    We value your support and would be more than happy to answer your questions and assist you with possible concerns…

    Best Wishes for your day.

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    • #6 by Carl on January 22, 2011 - 11:00 pm

      Thank you, Blaga. I appreciate the invite.

  4. #7 by Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved on January 23, 2011 - 10:47 pm

    I hope you are glad you joined Potluck. It’s nice to have you with us.

    This is a fine love poem. If you have written it for someone in your life, I hope your sentiments will be fullfilled and appreciated.

    • #8 by Carl on January 23, 2011 - 10:50 pm

      Ah, thank you, Jamie. This was a toy of the imagination, but my sentiments are being fulfilled and that is something to be grateful for…

  5. #9 by robin ellen lucas on January 24, 2011 - 9:18 am

    keep looking, don’t stop 😉

    • #10 by Carl on January 24, 2011 - 11:06 pm

      Yes! No reason to stop!

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