Crashing Fear of Ice

The motors of love pull,

Battle the cranky nurses

With thermometers and jello.

Motors hum with the deep

Seal of windows protecting

Clothing of one who loves.

Ice will penetrate but

Motors seep with rising rivers,

Bubbles which melt the circle.

Crystals cannot pierce the barrier,

And they continue to worship

Lovers who melt in thermometers.


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  1. #1 by Evelyn on January 17, 2011 - 9:13 pm

    This is my FAVORITE thing I have read so far.
    I love it.
    Wonderful! sharp and beautiful, images, sounds…
    I love it!

    • #2 by Carl on January 17, 2011 - 9:55 pm

      Thank you so much, Evelyn! It shows I do not have an objective view. I did not like it, but I could not figure out how to fix it, so it went out like it was. I appreciate your comment. I will learn from this. Thank you!

  2. #3 by y on January 24, 2011 - 9:07 pm

    this is very unique! i love the way it was crafted. thank you. and thank you for visiting my blog.

    • #4 by Carl on January 24, 2011 - 10:04 pm

      Thank you so much and thanks for commenting. I enjoyed your site.

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