Advertisements

Soul Pushed by Emptiness

I know the rage from this heat

That flows around and sticks to metal.

I feel all good spill violently

Through a painful hole

Below my ribs and unseen.

Heart is gone.

I melt over the liver as butter.

The heat of my soul is also gone.

It sticks to the metal.

The metal is wicked.

It smashes my mind.

Telling me you hate me.

It’s none of my business.

My emptiness is cruel.

It is crueler than you.

Advertisements

, ,

  1. #1 by fillingahole on December 18, 2010 - 8:05 pm

    wow.
    powerful

    • #2 by Carl on December 19, 2010 - 7:37 am

      I appreciate your taking the time to comment. I admire your material greatly, so this means a lot to me. Thank you.

      • #3 by fillingahole on December 21, 2010 - 7:18 pm

        Carl!
        Thank you!!
        feeling is mutual, so Im poking around

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: